Character: Maab Kuldar the Dwarf
Physical traits: The typical dwarvish attributes are standing short, stocky, bearded, fully-armed, and filthy - and Maab is no exception!
Personality Traits: Loyalty, toughness, bravery, and a perky attitude mingled with soft-heartedness are the trademarks of this axe-bearing character. But even dwarves have their bad sides. Like most of his kin, he is as stubborn as can be. A fiery temper frequently shows, but it is not an hasty temper that will flare up for the wrong reasons. He is wise in choosing in whom he can place his trust... or his hate.
Likes/Dislikes: As long as there are more orcs to decapitate, this dwarf couldn't be happier. Also among his chiefest joys are a good smoke and plenty of meat. Almost the only thing that riles Maab's temper is anyone who stands in his way or threatens him. He fears no living thing - except horses when he has to ride them!
Character: Huntram Shaster
Physical Traits: This 15-year-old has blonde wispy hair that is never combed for long and usually has hay in it. He is tall for his age, all arms and legs, and doesn't move as if he quite knows what to do with them. He is always sunburned and chewing on straw.
Personality Traits: Huntram is an adventurous boy, and hopes to get out of the farm one day to see the world - until he is dragged out of the farm to defend the world. Then he realizes that his home is where his heart is - but even that doesn't break his constant resolve to be great at what he tries. His valiant efforts are all too often disastrous. He loves his little brother, who ultimately got him into this "mess", and stays close to him through danger after danger.
Likes/Dislikes: Huntram's favorite thing in the world is normal, everyday farm life in the Iron Hills. He likes the old plow horse, even though the creature is as stubborn as a dwarf. Never having the knack for learning, he never went to school, and later found out how dull it was when he must learn - or die. He hates the schedule his wanderer friends are used to: going to bed only when it was too dark to ride, and getting up at the first morning light!
Hey Meggy,
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RYC: I know!!!! Revival!!!! I'm posting about your idea on my blogs today (hopefully), and let's get it going!
I'm excited...
loveya,
Nan
Absolutely delightful. You voice is so fun to read. Actually, you combined lessons 3 and 4 into the same lesson, so you may move onto lesson 5 after this. (OK, you can look at lesson 4 to see if you're missing anything, but I assure you, you have done it well).
ReplyDeleteYou say you're not sure you like what you wrote, but I do. Are these characters for a LOTR story you are contemplating?
Looking forward to seeing more.
Sorry...you want me to be hard on you, but it's hard to be hard when I can't find anything to suggest to make it clearer or....
Aren't character sketches FUN?
Meggy have I ever told you how awesome you are? Thanks for commenting jenmarie. That's the way to start fellowship and keep people coming to JFT site!
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